I'm assuming this pic is taken with the water running, yes?
Did you rough up the screen?
You have some "channelling" on the screen, areas where there is no flow, it looks like these are below the zip-ties but I see that in other areas. Tell me about your slot pipe:
what type of pipe did you use (i.e. sched 40 or DWV, what diameter, etc)
How did you cut the slot?
Is it relatively straight and even?
How long is your slot (same as how wide is your screen)?
Do you have the zip-ties cinched down really tight or are they pretty loose and just holding the screen in place (they look tight in the photo)
How much water flow are you pushing across the screen? If you don't know exactly, a pump model and then a description of your feed plumbing routing would help me tell you if you are OK or not