Critique my scape

[ca1ore]

Less is more; rule of thirds; avoid symmetry ...... other than that, if it looks right then it is right.

 

[andrewkw]

I think you have greatly improved it. How much space do you have above it and to the sides and front to back? maybe put some tape lines to show this. I like the way the 2 rock structures look from above, if possible in the tank I'd pull one a little closer to the front and one closer to back. It's really hard to judge when it's just sitting on a tarp. I've always found looking at my own photos then looking at the rock in person helps vs just sitting there staring at the rocks on the floor or in the tank.

 

[Dragonreef202]

don't worry too much about how it looks when you add corals you may change it again. I have had tanks for ten years and I keep changing the aquascape. I hope one day i'll have a aquascape that I can live with.

 

[Ocean Lotion]

I like it a lot. Looks like a good structure to grow corals on.

 

[I_Got_Crabs]

That looks great! Much improved

 

[Samina]

Thanks everyone! I like this version better also.

I will try to put it in the tank to get an idea of how it looks in there. Good idea!

 

[JohnnyTabasco]

I would place the structures so they don't form a line. Maybe have one "tilted" seen from above... I did this awesome drawing in paint to illustrate

This way there you will create some interest with a more 3D scape.
Just my opinion.