Umm I think you should start again.
Reason being you come so close to it spelling " lovely" you got lovly but not in order so sure you can add a " e" and rearrange ha ha .
Nah on serious note ot does look good.
For me when building a scape it has to have caves for fishy sleeping quarters and to swim into to feel secure if threatened .
Needs under hangs, over hangs, swim throughs and be staggered if look from above it staggers forward,by this I mean if put a coral on top of scape it won't shadow everything below it ( unless putting low light corals there off course )
Need enough room around edges so can get an algae scraper and your hand into clean glass and enough room for fish to swim and use this part of tank .
Give enough room at top of scape for corals to grow up towards the light whilst still leaving some room for active fish to swim.
But all in all depends if you like it as your tank and depends on the fish and corals you plan to add later,it's how I designed my scape anyhow.
And let flow get in and between the Rocks and as little as rock as possible on bottom so didnt attract detritus to settle there.
But all in all you got most bases covered and looks cool scape indeed which is good till your corals grow into it,then when get packed reef tank won't be able see much rock anyway ha ha
Good luck and hope you and your family get great enjoyment from your tank ^_^
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