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@brandon429
I really want to offer some constructive criticism about the way you write. It's a little harsh but I don't know how else to say it and you seem totally unaware. I'll just add I believe you're in the US and fluent in English.
You consistently use needlessly complicated language, use words incorrectly, and outright make up terms. You'll write many paragraphs, some of which irrelevant to the thread, for what needs 2 sentences. We all make mistakes and typos, heck I made a few typos in my last post, but you write a lot of extremely long and confusing posts. Of course sometimes complex problems require complex explanations but, when we can, we should try to help people by summarizing what they can do clearly and concisely.
Some examples from today
The first step is "water pouring"?
"stopping or slowing the loss cascading the main tank is going to be hyperdriving" ? Did you proofread this?
I really want to offer some constructive criticism about the way you write. It's a little harsh but I don't know how else to say it and you seem totally unaware. I'll just add I believe you're in the US and fluent in English.
You consistently use needlessly complicated language, use words incorrectly, and outright make up terms. You'll write many paragraphs, some of which irrelevant to the thread, for what needs 2 sentences. We all make mistakes and typos, heck I made a few typos in my last post, but you write a lot of extremely long and confusing posts. Of course sometimes complex problems require complex explanations but, when we can, we should try to help people by summarizing what they can do clearly and concisely.
Some examples from today
"Can't rip clean" what?****What if power is not back yet, couple days expected****
can’t rip clean if all power is off, pre CPR preps:
many posts exist to show water pouring, heating and pouring back saltwater
The first step is "water pouring"?
What is "miniature" about this step?there is a miniature relocation step you must time in order to prevent a complete crash of all animals. Moving live rock and circulation and clean water and remaining animals into a bucket is key to stopping or slowing the loss cascading the main tank is going to be hyperdriving since its got a metric ton of organics, and dying hangers-on. That won’t be in the tote.
"stopping or slowing the loss cascading the main tank is going to be hyperdriving" ? Did you proofread this?
"warmed creatively"? We're discussing a power outage, now I can think of a few possible ways but that's not the point, you should summarize how we warm creatively. That's like one of the major questions at hand.consider lifting out live rock and taking remaining fish and corals into a tote, warmed creatively


