Fifth video! Need some constructive criticism

[Layne.Wilson]

I feel like this is my best video yet! What should I improve on for my next video?

 

[DC Reefer]

I feel like this is my best video yet! What should I improve on for my next video?

Nice video - was that your device pinging just after the 4 minute mark?

 

[Layne.Wilson]

Nice video - was that your device pinging just after the 4 minute mark?

It was meant to be a sound effect accompanying the arrow. I see what your saying though I should have made the arrow and sound show up later after it switched to a new scene.

 

[DC Reefer]

It was meant to be a sound effect accompanying the arrow. I see what your saying though I should have made the arrow and sound show up later after it switched to a new scene.

HaHa, I kept looking at my phone

 

[ariellemermaid]

Great: face lighting/set, transitions, audio + presentation, focus on topic, pop in graphics to keep it interesting.

Not so great: wayyyyy too long intro. The entire first 30 seconds of the video are shots of a box. Literally, a box. On the plus side, it set very low expectations for the rest of the video which totally surprised to the up side!