Layne.Wilson
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I feel like this is my best video yet! What should I improve on for my next video?
Fifth video! Need some constructive criticism
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Layne.Wilson
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It was meant to be a sound effect accompanying the arrow. I see what your saying though I should have made the arrow and sound show up later after it switched to a new scene.
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Great: face lighting/set, transitions, audio + presentation, focus on topic, pop in graphics to keep it interesting.
Not so great: wayyyyy too long intro. The entire first 30 seconds of the video are shots of a box. Literally, a box. On the plus side, it set very low expectations for the rest of the video which totally surprised to the up side!
Not so great: wayyyyy too long intro. The entire first 30 seconds of the video are shots of a box. Literally, a box. On the plus side, it set very low expectations for the rest of the video which totally surprised to the up side!
