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[Nburg's Reef]

a 20g long I used to house some stuff while I moved my big tank. Mostly low lying rocks with a few branchy pieces sticking up toward the surface. Corals filled in the rest of the space

 

[RobB'z Reef]

So this is my first aquarium and it’s a 20 gallon long. Dimensions are 30x12x12. I know that the Aqua scape is ultimately up to me but I really want this to look nice so criticism is appreciated. Below is my first try.

I think you have a pretty good start going there. I like the cave to the left, maybe try and lower that top piece a bit but you're doing good. At least it isn't one of those awful god forsaken negative aquascapes lol

 

[Kingkold020]

I think you need a bigger tank

I wish. My parents probably wouldn’t let me go past 29 gallons.

 

[sfin52]

I wish. My parents probably wouldn’t let me go past 29 gallons.

A good start